Saviour, I see Your mansion’s height – M. Lokhvitskaya

Russian Silver Age poetry translation series, 55/?

In January 2020, I applied for a literary translation residency program at the Banff Centre, for a project to translate Mirra Lokhvitskaya’s poetry into English. I argued that this collection would show English readers a fascinating and brilliant woman who communicated her own emotional life as a woman, lover, wife, mother, and devout believer, rather than serving any ideology of masculine priorities, and who had been unjustly scorned and neglected for over a century. 

I did not get in. But then the entire residency program was cancelled because it was 2020, and my own life circumstances changed so much that I would be unlikely to attend a residency in the next few years. I am now adding the new poem translations I created for that application to my own website to share with the world.

This one, I like for its parallels with George Herbert’s “Love Bade Me Welcome.” I am not sure whether Lokhvitskaya was aware of that poem.

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Saviour, I see Your mansion’s height,

With all Your glory its walls glitter.

But I lack dress proper and fit to

Enter it, so I have no right. 

Giver of light and of belief,

Enlighten this soul’s garb of mine,

And in Your kingdom’s glory shining

Save me from sorrow and from grief.

1893; translation by Tamara Vardomskaya, January 2020.